POM: Yes I know, Ugh…! I didnt want to see the truth on that paragraph formating thing ’cause it Means lots of more Work for Little ol’ me. Buut I see your points. I didnt think it looked to bad in Word, the program, but once I put it in fanfic net it does look a bit compact. I will see to it about changing that some.
Right now Im a Little turned of on writing this fic though, not so much the actual writing of the story itself, but all the Work that comes after, with checking spelling and grammar. Lord knows I hate that stuff, but it gotta be done I know, if I want anyone to read the story. The story is turning out to be a lot longer then I thought to begin with. That seems to happen everytime I write something. And the longer it becomes the more grammar checks I have to do 🙂
dont worry I appreciate constructive crits 🙂