Relations in these situations

[pixiexw]

So I’m writing a story that sort of got out of hand and I could really use some help with character reactions. Obviously I have my own thoughts on how the story should go and how the characters will react but it would be good to get some other opinions.
So the background, it takes place after 2×09 and starts with a basic morning in the Charming household, lol. Emma is out and the rest of the family are just dragging themselves out of bed to get on with the day. Next thing we know Snow faints, although caught by her husband. She had mentioned not feeling right, feeling very weak and then just fainted. Henry is instructed to call an ambulance after five minutes with no change. When Paramedics arrive she is awake but they take her to hospital just to be safe. Emma is phoned from the ambulance and stops at home to get some clothes for her Mum before meeting them at the hospital. The whole family are there when the results of her blood test arrive back. It confirms she fainted due to low blood pressure and low blood sugar but also gives her a hCG reading in the thousands meaning only one thing- She’s pregnant.
Character reactions…? This is where `I hand it to you, how do you think the four in the room would react to this news??

Second question- it will later come out that the baby is in fact not Charming’s, but Whale’s. Reactions from the adults only on this one- don’t think Henry should know.
Any help is much appreciated, it helps me as the writer know if I’m going down the right path.
Thank You:D

[gypsy]

Wouldn’t want to see that on the show, but in a fan fic – that’s a great twist 🙂

[jessieparadoxes of people]

I think maybe Emma would be really shocked at this and immediately go to Rumplestiltskin.She might think that he has some plan and gave her a magic potion to make her with child.Charming and Snow would be really confused,not knowing when or how it happened.Rumple of course will deny everything and eventually practically throw everyone out of the shop(great opportunity for some Rumple sarcasm 🙂 ).

When it comes out that Whale is really father,Whale will go off to drink in his office.Emma will be stupified;Charming will be enraged,while Snow is shocked but is trying to hold Charming back.And everyone could be thinking about who the child will be raised with?

Keeper of King George's Coat of arms;Tiny's pickaxe;Belle's bronze vase;Emma Hacker device and true love kiss to Henry;Granny's surcharge on pickles;Snow's "Good will always win;Regina's apple turnover;Gold's pink shirt,Mickey phone,&glasses(1x12);RQ's chess set,and Chip's shattered remains

[pixiexw]

Also, just popped into my head- the baby is discovered as being Whale’s because he has Canavan Syndrome which is genetic! And that made me think, would Whale want to be involved with his son?

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