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Boy! You Guys Work fast :O Ash already uploaded the new chapter, so its my turn Again…Yay for that!!! I will go on the job of writing right this minute….
But I wont be uploading chapter 3 for atleast a day or two.
also Im gonna say 2000 Words might be cutting it slim in some cases, so lets say max Word number is 3000 🙂
We need a writer for chapter 4. Come out, Come out, Where ever you are!!! I know you want too 😉
[adrotate group="5"]Once Upon a horrendous Confusion
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1 chapter
It was early morning in Storybrook. The day after Emma had returned with Hook through the twirling time portal. Light was just starting to come through the white lace curtains and into one of the rented rooms at Granny’s. Emma opened her eyes wide, she had been dreaming something that had startled her, but she didn’t remember what now. She blinked a couple of times to rid her eyes of the clingy sleep and turned around to look at the man sleeping next to her. Just a week ago, or actually just a couple of days ago, she would have laughed if anyone had suggested, that she would be waking up next to Killian Jones one of these days. But never the less there he was. She looked at the bedside table where his hook was hanging on the lamp stand. Emma smiled to herself, as she thought about last night, but then she was reminded that not everything about last night was just as smile worthy as how Killian’s hook had ended up at that lamp stand.
She, Emma had really royally messed up some things now. All she had wanted to do, was to do the right thing. She saved that woman, she didn’t know the woman was Marian. Emma thought to herself what she would have done if she had known who Marian was, while she was sitting with her in that dungeon cell. Would she have done the same and brought her with them to Storybrook? she wasn’t sure. But she would have had to help the woman somehow. Emma was the Savior, it what people expected of her, was it not? But it was hard to live up to this title -Savior- It sounded so grandiose and impressive. Emma sure didn’t feel like that title fitted her, when all she felt like she was, was a girl named Emma.. nothing more than that, except maybe a mother.
Emma had already agreed that Henry should sleep at Regina’s place before the incident at the dinner last night. Emma was a bit weary about that situation now, how mad was Regina at her? She wondered if Regina could perhaps think to take Henry away, maybe take him with her to another land. Both to punish Emma, and because Regina was too sad perhaps, to stay in Storybrook. But no.. Emma thought, if she knew Regina, and she felled that she did quite well now, she knew that Regina would stay and try to solve this situation with Robin. She knew that Regina had it in bad for him.. Emma had seen the love in the other woman’s eyes even when Regina didn’t have her heart and now that she had that back, those feelings would be even stronger.
Suddenly she was pulled away from her thought when there was someone knocking at the door. It wasn’t a quiet and patient knock, like you might expect from someone knocking at your door this early in the morning, it wasn’t a feverish troubling knock either, but just hard and fast enough to have Emma on her feet in a second and Hook waking up and looking a bit confused from all the hustling. What now, please God, or whoever, don’t let this be a new adventure knocking at my door! Emma thought to herself on her way to open the door, she had had enough adventures lately. Emma opened the door to see Granny’s familiar stern eyes looking back at her.
Granny skipped quickly over the ordinary morning courtesies of good morning and how are you, to bring Emma the news that a witch had been seen in town during the night. Granny explains that she has sent Ruby and Leroy to get the Mayor and Henry. Emma asks if she thinks it could be Zelena, but Granny says this witch looked nothing like her, this witch had ice white hair.
Granny suggests they call everyone to let them know what’s going on and everyone should keep a look out for this new witch. Granny also mention that she thinks that there are strange things going on in this town and how everyone has been acting weird about stuff lately, sort of out of character. She mentions how David the other day kept babbling something about how he would always find Snow and all the while Snow was right there next to him the whole time. To Granny, it looked as if he was reading from a script and had accidentally opened it on the wrong page. Emma dismisses it and says he is just overwhelmed at becoming a father, but agrees that something has felt off lately and that they should all try to keep an eye out.
Granny ends the conversation telling Emma and Hook to come down and have some breakfast, while they wait for Ruby to bring back the Mayor and Henry. Then they can discuss what more to do about this new witch situation.
……At the same time, Leroy and Ruby comes walking up a road. They are heading towards the Mayors mansion. Leroy looks grumpily down at the pavement “I really will never know why it is that we must always include the evil queen…..”
Ruby looks at him “but Leroy, she has proved she is on our side now”
“Hah..I don’t think I will ever trust her really. I’m sorry to say. I’ve seen all that she was capable of and then now, with this Marian mess.. Who knows how she will react”
Ruby looks ahead and decides to drop the conversation. She understands how Leroy feels and doesn’t really know if she should take his side on this or not. They reach the mansion and walks up to knock at Regina’s door. She opens.
Leroy braces himself to address the Evil Queen standing before him “Madam Mayor.. We have terrible news” he says.Ruby interrupts him “Well we don’t know if they are terrible yet, but a new witch has been seen in town. Happy saw her tonight.. I think… you need to come back with us to Granny’s”
…….Meanwhile, somewhere far beyond the storybook. Far beyond the Enchanted Forest, Oz and any other of the many enchanted realms, two witches sad brewing up a story.
“Oh this is much too confusing! .. Kisses we cannot write this…. Ed, are you listening?”
“Why not, Adam? it’s a Kiss.. and story readers loves true love kisses. And then an enchanted kiss is even better”
“But she wouldn’t Ed, she would never just kiss him like that. We need more build up”
“Hm I don’t know Horrorwitch. Try and call Wickedly Jane, perhaps she will have an idea.. but hurry up, we need to turn this one in today or Plot Divisus is going to throw a fit”
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(1 Chapter is continued by Watcher in the next post)Oh what horrendous confusion- 3 votes
Once upon a horrendous confusion- 3 votes
Once upon a plot- 1 vote
Once upom a plot device- 1 vote
So its a tie between two of them. Im gonna flip a coin :). Crown side (we call it that in denmark, dont know the American term) is ‘Oh what…’ other side is ‘Once Upon…’
*flips*
Okay it landed with plat side up. So the title will be “Once Upon a Horrendous Confusion” 🙂
out of those shows other people have listed, Ive seen a Little bit of Agents of Shields. I kinda liked it, but it wasnt one that hooked me in for good.
And then Ive watched season one of Under the Dome. That one I loved.. I watched it as a marathon viewing, because they showed the Whole season in one day (reruns) here in Denmark. Im definantly going to Watch second season of that one.
Game of Thrones is also a must (mostly) see. Ive tried to read the books I LOVED the first three volumes, but then for me it just gets a bit repetitive somehow.. but I have to know what happens in the story still, so now its just the tv version for me.
Other American shows. Sometimes I Watch Greys anatomy. But its not as good as it used to be or maybe it has just gone for too long. Im wanting more and more to try to Watch Doctor Who because all you Guys speak of it so warmly, so thats the next thing on netflix for me.
my vote -“Oh what Horrendous Confusion”
lol Wat. You got that last one in right in the last minute… NO more suggestions now- vote for those listed in the above post 😉
so there are 2 votes on “Once Upon a Horrendous Confusion”
2 votes on “Oh what Horrendous Confusion”
Crystal Princess-
The ship rules are:
No ships may be considered end-game and that therefor no shipper should be upset because another writer might choose to write their favorite character with a different person. But also its important to trie to continue the story the way the writers before you have written it, but this is a bendable rule, if you see an opening for a character to “shift” romance that is up to you and your writing skills to make it sound plausible.
These rules goes for all ships.
But there have been talk that Rumbelle and Snowing should maybe be considered end-game couples, so if someone would want to change that, I suggest they take it up here on this thread before hand.
Vote for your fave title. Voting ends on sunday.
Titles up for votes:
“Once Upon a Plot”
“Once Upon a Plot Device”
“Oh what Horrendous Confusion”
“Once Upon a Horrendous Confusion”
Place your vote on the one you like. If there are no votes on sunday. I pick wich one I like the most 😉
I think in a show like Once, a same sex romance would be a good idea. I dont think its good when its a ‘throphy’ thing or you know when its just put there for the sake of it being there.
But on Once it would make good sense because its about true love.. and especially the kids and Young folk watching, should see that true love can come in more than just the old fashioned way.
I can see Tink as a great character for a relationship with a girl. She and Mulan would be good together perhabs.
