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I’m sorry it takes me so long! I had important exams but now I’m free so it’s going faster. I’m almost done but I know it must be annoying to wait so I’ll post now most of the chapter and in a few days I’ll post the other part. Also English is my second language so if you see any mistake in the chapter please tell me so I can fix it. Hope you’ll enjoy reading my chapter
@TheSwanPrincess…Not gonna lie…I sooooooo wanted you to keep going!!!!!!!! Your chapter had me on the edge of my seat, and I’m hoping that you write another if one’s available. You set up one of the most brilliant things, and I had so many MILLS FEELS flooding through me between Regina and Henry, and then Regina and Zelena!!! I LOVED IT!!! Congrats!!!! This was brilliant!
OMG thank you! I don’t write a lot so I wasn’t sure if anyone is going to like this 🙂
I have two more scenes, one of them I almost finished and the other one I already imagined in my head but I haven’t written yet. It’s probably going to take two or three days…
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I’m sorry it takes me so long! I had important exams but now I’m free so it’s going faster. I’m almost done but I know it must be annoying to wait so I’ll post now most of the chapter and in a few days I’ll post the other part.
Also English is my second language so if you see any mistake in the chapter please tell me so I can fix it.
Hope you’ll enjoy reading my chapter 🙂
You know what I can't continue with the dead people brought back to life list I'm out of space in the signature and now we have an underworld arc this is to much I quit why do you bring so many people back to life OUAT WHHHYYYY
Chapter 8
Emma was still at the hospital with Graham. He seemed to calm down a little after Regina left. “I assume I can’t convince you to run and take Henry away from that woman before she’ll hurt him right?” he asked.
“I already told you, she’s different now. Besides, she always kept him safe, even before I came to Storybrooke” Emma said.
He sighed. “So… What is The kid angry at you about?”
“Well, this is slightly awkward” she replied, “His father died a few days ago…”
“His father?”
“Yes… It’s a long story. Anyway, I sort of got into a new relationship now and…”
“A new relationship?” Graham asked silently. Just when she was about to answer him the door opened and Hook entered the room.
“Speaking of which… This is Killian, Killian, this is Graham” she introduced between the two men.
“Nice to meet you mate” Hook said and handed his hookless hand. Graham shook his hand reluctantly.
“You have a hook” he stated when he noticed Hook’s other arm. “Who are you, Captain Hook from that Disney film?” he laughed.
“Aye that I am”.
“Seriously?” he asked.
Emma rolled her eyes. “Ok, I think I Graham must be tired of everything that happened today, why won’t we leave and let him get some rest?” she said and started pushing Hook to the door.
“Emma wait” Graham called right when she was about to exit.
She turned around. “Yeah?”
“We obviously need to talk about a lot of things… Granny’s wasn’t closed during these two years right?”
Emma laughed. “It’s open”.
“Then I’ll see you there, maybe at around six?” He asked and smiled.
“Not for a date, right? Because the lady is in a very happy relationship with me!” Hook called from the hallway.
Emma rolled her eyes again. “Sounds good” she said and closed the door behind her and her annoying pirate.
Just then she heard the sound of a message from her iPhone. It was from Mary Margaret: Come to our apartment, Elsa has something to say to us about the writers.
*******
“Let’s start with… What do you know about magic?” Regina asked Henry.
“Well, true love is the most powerful magic of them all” he answered.
“True, but maybe we can focus on actual magic that you can learn?”.
“Ok…” the kid said, “All magic comes with a price?”.
“That’s also correct, but let’s try to think about stuff that you didn’t hear from your family members” Regina tried again.
Henry tried to think but then Regina’s phone biped. “If it’s Emma then don’t bother” he said.
She laughed. “No, it’s a text from Mary Margaret.”
“What does she say?”
“Your idiot side of the family is having a meeting about this whole writers thing, so I need to start a fight with Marian to distract the witches from them”. She answered.
“But why would you fight her? Didn’t you and Robin get back together?” He asked her.
“Well yes, at least I think so, but I’m sure she isn’t happy about it, and she already hates me from the whole trying to execute her thing, so I don’t think it would be such a problem”.
Just then her phone ringed. A number that she didn’t recognize this time. She answered.
“Hello?”
“What’s up sis?” she was surprised to hear Zelena’s voice.
“How did you get my number?”
“What? I thought we’re doing the whole sisterly thing aren’t we? Doesn’t that include calling you and asking what’s up?”
“That did’t answered my question… You know what, never mind.” Regina sighed.
“So… Listen sis, I was wondering where I can find Belle French”
“It’s Belle Gold now”
“Really?” Zelena asked, “Good for her! So do you know where?”
“Are you going to threaten her or hurt her?”
“What? No! I’m not stupid, I’m talking this second chance. We’re just going to have a little chat! I want to apologize to her” Zelena said.
Regina felt like her sister wasn’t being completely honest with her, but as long as she wasn’t going to hurt the bookworm then she didn’t really care. “She’s probably at Gold’s shop” she said.
“Yes I know that but I really don’t want to run into Rumplestiltskin.”
“Oh, so in that case I would go check at the library. If she’s not in the shop she’s there” Regina replied.
“Thank you! So, what are you doing right now?” Zelena asked her.
“Right now I’m with my son but I need to go and fight with some girl”. She answered.
“Why would you need to do that?”
“To distract the writers” she said. She already told Zelena about what happened since her death.
“In that case you don’t need to”
“Really? Why is that?”
“Because I’m about to make quite a scene myself…” her sister said.
“What kind of scene?” Regina asked suspiciously.
“The scene where I tell the girl the truth about her husband” she said and hung up.
“What is she doing?” Henry asked Regina.
“No idea”, she said, “so… Where were we?”.
*******
As Emma went up the stairs to Mary Margaret and David’s apartment she felt the air getting colder. That meant that Elsa was there. When she opened the door she saw their regular group: Mary Margaret, Ruby, Granny and the dwarves, and indeed, Elsa was there too.
“Where’s David?” She asked when she noticed his absence.
“He’s at the park with baby Neal, this cold is not good for babies.” Mary Margaret said. Right. Baby Neal. She’ll never get used to that. “Here, have a coat” she said and handed her one of the big fur coats they were all wearing.
“So what is going on? Emma asked while wearing it.
“The return of your sheriff and the witch must mean that the storywriting witches know that we found out what they’re doing” Elsa said, “And that means that we must take action”.
“And do what?” Emma asked again.
“Get out of the story into the real world and take control of our lives” Ruby said from her seat.
She didn’t know what to think about that. She certainly had enough of portals and world jumpings, but she understood how important it was- she already noticed the storywriting witches’ subtle influence on their lives, so who knows what else they did to her friends, to her? Are the choices she made even hers?
“Ok, than how?” she asked.
“Ordinary plot holes allow you to open a peeking hole to the writer’s world. To open an actual portal we need a plot hole that can be used to move between realms. That way the plot hole magic will be combined with the portal opening magic. We need something like a magic mirror, a hat…”
“A magic bean?” Emma asked.
Elsa nodded.
“Hook traded his ship for one after the second curse. I can ask him who was it that gave him the bean” she said and picked her phone out of her pocket. “Right after I’ll meet with Graham, I’m already late” she added when she saw the hour on her phone screen.
“Have fun!” Mary Margaret said. Emma smiled and left the apartment.
You know what I can't continue with the dead people brought back to life list I'm out of space in the signature and now we have an underworld arc this is to much I quit why do you bring so many people back to life OUAT WHHHYYYY
I wouldn’t call Frankenwolf a crack ship. It’s basicaly canon that the reason we havn’t seen Ruby all this time is because she was doing fun things with Whale…
Oh and I love Golden Heart. Hate Cora and Rumple together but their ship has such a pretty name!
You know what I can't continue with the dead people brought back to life list I'm out of space in the signature and now we have an underworld arc this is to much I quit why do you bring so many people back to life OUAT WHHHYYYY
MuFire – I feel like it could have had potential to develop into something else. Regina and Neal – I didn’t get it at first but it made sense at the time; they both came from broken family backgrounds and love Henry. EvilFire was the name.
Yes Regina and Neal! My one true crack ship! I used to ship them as friends with benefits. I actually had a fanfic in my head about them. It was after “Going Home”, Snow made Regina open some sort of an office in FTL to help people and fix all the damage that the original curse caused to the land. She also made Regina hire Neal because he knew a lot about magic from his father and he needed company after his father’s death. So they both worked together and solved magical problems and found out that they have a lot in common. Obviously I never wrote it because I’m super lazy.
I also still ship MonkeySwan. Walsh is supposed to be a good guy now after Zelena died right?
You know what I can't continue with the dead people brought back to life list I'm out of space in the signature and now we have an underworld arc this is to much I quit why do you bring so many people back to life OUAT WHHHYYYY
But I need guidance and help 🙁
No but seriously if anyone has ideas share because I have no idea what I’m doing 🙂
You know what I can't continue with the dead people brought back to life list I'm out of space in the signature and now we have an underworld arc this is to much I quit why do you bring so many people back to life OUAT WHHHYYYY
Wow what a great chapter!
I’m going to start writing the new chapter but I have a little question: This is supposed to be the first “out” chapter, so does it mean that I need to get the charcters out of the story to the real world (where the writers are)?
You know what I have another little question: I was thinking about making a character cooperate with the writers (I don’t want to say who because it’s a surprise) , but if Hook will become a villain again than it will be a little too much. So what do you thing, should I do it?
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I thought the second curse recreated Storybrook like it was before the undoing, magic and memories included.
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Nice.
“she is aware of the threat she poses if she were to lose control of her magic again”- What if she asked Rumple to lock her in the jar because she thinks she’s a treat?
You know what I can't continue with the dead people brought back to life list I'm out of space in the signature and now we have an underworld arc this is to much I quit why do you bring so many people back to life OUAT WHHHYYYY
Oh. I don’t have a problem with Robin and Regina together, but I was sure this was the case. It’s a perfect plot twist and chance for Robin to be with Marian and Regina to be happy. Well, nevermind then.
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