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Fitzimmons from Agents of SHIELD. The show calls them Fitzsimmons…how much more obvious could they make it. Right now, my darlings are going through a rough patch, but they will be okay!
And Shaun and Juliet from Psych! I shipped it from the beginning!
And Colonel Brandon and Marianne from Sense and Sensibility (the book and movie!)
[adrotate group="5"]I just finished the next chapter, and posted it! I hope you all like it…it’s somewhat ridiculous in parts, but it was fun to write. I would love any advice on my writing technique/creativity, stuff like that. College essays coming very soon…so any imput would be awesome!
“Well, marriage counseling is my specialty”, Blue smirked, amused that Rumple would trust her so easily. He was so distraught over his marriage issues that he couldn’t see behind the real reason for her helping him. He didn’t even know that Henry really was dead! She was giddy with the idea of herself being the most powerful one in Storybrooke.
‘Easy there, girl’, she thought to herself, ‘first you have to deliver the Dark One to the witches.’ She was so much smarter than Rumple, smarter than the witches, even smarter than Plot Devisus himself! She turned back to Rumple, and smiled consolingly at him. “I know Archie is the therapist, but I assure you, I will be wayyy more useful than the little cricket. Follow me.”
In the witches lair:
“KISSES!… HORRORWITCH!!!!!!!!” thundered Plot Devisus, “What have you done?!”
“Umm, well, sir, we killed off Henry”, Kisses whispered, “just like you to told us to.”
“NO! Not like I told you to! Where was the buildup? The suspense? You needed to give a reason for Hook to kill Henry! Fix it…NOW!” Plot Devisus poofed away in a turquoise mist.
“Ummmm Kisses?”, Horrowitch squeaked, “what do we do? We don’t have time to do a ‘going back in time’ curse again.
“Well, we’re just going to have to do one of those ‘one day earlier…’ things. Maybe that will be enough to pacify the viewers.”One day earlier…
“I know you want to spend time with Henry, Emma, and I do too. I feel like I need to get to know him a lot better. But leave him with Regina this afternoon…we haven’t had the chance to do anything with all this worrying about these witches.”
Emma gazed at Hook. She had actually wanted to spend the evening with Henry…he’d seemed different lately, and she felt guilty for not being there for him. Emma also wanted to spend some alone time with Hook, but…
“I’d be careful if I were you, Miss Swan”, came a soft voice from behind them. Emma and Hook spun around to find a livid Rumplestiltskin standing behind them on the sidewalk. “You wouldn’t be the first woman this pirate has lured away from her son. And as I remember, it didn’t end too well for her”. He paused, glaring at Hook. “What happened? Oh yes, she died”.
“No thanks to you!” Hook yelled. “And there is NO WAY I’m letting you lay a hand on Emma”. He stepped forward and lowered his voice to an angry whisper, so only Rumple could hear: “Milah never loved you! She hated her life with you! She begged me to take her away. And I didn’t know she had a son. I had no idea until after she made plans to run away. ”
“Oh how very convenient for you, dearie. I-”
“Wait a minute!” Emma interrupted. She glared at Rumplestiltskin and said accusingly: “You killed Milah? Hook’s wife?” Rumple’s eyes blazed as he glared defiantly at Hook: “Milah wasn’t the pirate’s wife dearie, she was mine. Did you miss the part where I said ‘lured away from her son’?”
Emma gaped at him, and then turned to face Hook. “So your ‘lost love’ Milah was Gold’s wife?! Neal’s mom?! And now you think you can just…Arghh! No wonder he hated his childhood. You both disgust me.”
“Emma, love”, Hook pleaded looking hurt “I had no idea. I loved her, and when I met Bae…Neal, I loved him too. If I had known that he and you…well, I would have never gone near you.”
“You know what? You two figure this out! I’m going to find my son.” Emma stormed away, upset and horrendously confused.Back in the witches lair
“You did it Kisses!” Horrowitch sighed, “Now the pirate is so heartbroken, that the viewers will totally understand why he wanted to kill Henry. I’m just glad that Hook was so easily persuaded.
“Yes”, Kisses murmured, “And if it doesn’t work out, we’ll just kill Hook and set up Emma with Whale.”
“Whale?!”, Horrorwitch screeched, “What on earth are you talking about? Plot Devisus would never let us make him a character of real importance! And besides…they’ve barely had a scene together!”
“Oh, Horrorwitch, don’t be a clumsy porcupine!”, Kisses squealed. “It’s called a plot twist! It’s when the writers do something the viewers never would have expected.”
“Hmmmmm”, Horrorwitch mused, “Now that’s an idea.”CORBIN, I think you’re next…maybe. Well, have fun!
I’m not sure how many Les Miserables fans are out there, but does Neal remind anyone of Eponine? Really rough childhood/life, dies young to save the person they love, the person they love goes on to date/marry someone else RIGHT AFTER they die. And they were both my favorite characters in their respective shows.
That’s no problem….it will give me plenty of time to contemplate how to follow up your (Watcher’s) stunning piece! 🙂
