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some fanfic stuff

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  • This topic has 4 replies, 2 voices, and was last updated 11 years, 4 months ago by Grimmsister.
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  • February 19, 2014 at 2:18 pm #246084
    Grimmsister
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    The curse of the first

    Come Child Come see we calleth Thee. You will Us trust to set you free. And by a choice with darkest cost you rip the heart of beloved must. A cursed one is she.

    She sets the discord of her people for she was named the Queen of Evil. The Others knows her Will comes back, for a wheel has no end but starts at black.

    And by the pricking of a thumb something wicked her way come.

     

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    February 19, 2014 at 2:25 pm #246086
    Grimmsister
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    The curse of the third

    If sisters three will curse, the cursed will curse the Others free. The white flakes hides the beastly truth that underneath are red drops seeping, trough frozen ground silently weeping. Away they walked that broke that shell and left the burned downed ones to hell. But spring will come in this new land and what they brought by sisters hands was that deceiving jealousy and magic eases easily its way when These Ones teases thee. Below beneath that whited veil, the blood of left ones nourished well, a rose bush grew soon by bloody stead, with roses red. And up its stealthy oily sap we swim to have them in their nap. The little ones which fingers curiously will find a thorn and find it pricke-ly through such a way we find it opens, opens doors that leads Our way, Our way to new lands as they say.

    And by a prickeling of a thumb the Wicked soon to them will come.

    February 19, 2014 at 2:29 pm #246087
    Grimmsister
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    I need eyes and reading minds on this stuff, please tell me what you think good and bad.

    February 19, 2014 at 3:35 pm #246098
    once_dude
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    hmm quite interesting. however you could format them so that they look more like poetic linies instead of paragraphs.

     

    Magic always comes with a price, so I pay with visa.

    February 19, 2014 at 4:10 pm #246111
    Grimmsister
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    hmm quite interesting. however you could format them so that they look more like poetic linies instead of paragraphs.

    Thanks for your comment once_dude. Yes I agree with the formating. On Word(the program) its formated differently but I cant figure out how to do that here unfortunately.

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